The suit looks great and the details on it are spot on I have to say!
The only things I have noticed is Pike’s boots. So I’ve attached an image showing his boots. It appears the soles are much darker than the other members of the crew and also they don’t appear to have the Starfleet insignia on the side as yours do. Other than that I don’t see any other issues with the suit.
Cleared suits: Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark
Current WIP: Han Solo ANH
Spiderman Homecoming: RI
Star Lord GOTG2: RI